On a scale of delusional to big facts, am I a top 5 lyricist of 2020s? (serious question)

[FruitOfTheVale]

Came in here to call you delusional, but you're actually pretty dope.

A little lyrical miracle at times but your pen is sharp and the flow is solid.

I got some beats for you too if you're interested.

Respect! DM me what you had in mind I'll listen

 

[iseetrolledpeople]

This is like a thread where you come in thinking it's jayz bait thread, ready to clown and it's actually some real shyt.

I was ready to do it but you're Ok. English being my 3rd language this bar bar bar bar focused rap isn't a everyday thing for me because it feels like a chore sometimes. But it's ok.

Another Booth battle coming soon or what?

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

This is like a thread where you come in thinking it's jayz bait thread, ready to clown and it's actually some real shyt.

I was ready to do it but you're Ok. English being my 3rd language this bar bar bar bar focused rap isn't a everyday thing for me because it feels like a chore sometimes. But it's ok.

Another Booth battle coming soon or what?

Damn that's wassup, can't imagine deciphering bars in a 3rd language lol props.

What was the last booth battle, C-Styles vs. AV? shyt was classic

 

[LOST IN THE SAUCE]

Respect! DM me what you had in mind I'll listen

I can't figure out how to DM

My bad, I'm new around here.

Check out my soundcloud. If you like anything feel free to go for it.

TheSauceApostle

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It seems I like shyt a little more uptempo than you, so I don't know if our styles will mesh, but here's some beats I think might work for you.

 

[GreenGhxst]

The next level of lyricism is making the content flow

Some of the stuff holds context in your head, but I feel you need to weave more real life examples

Make it closer than generalizations for some of the content

Dig a little bit deeper, you're below surface, but not below enough

A bit delusional, but great potential, a little bit deeper and less static references

I dont feel enough, you're teaching, but I need to feel the experience, think of a black pastor preaching his ass off on a Sunday.. make it more you



Thats my take

 

[Pillmattic]

Yo we posting music?

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

I can't figure out how to DM

My bad, I'm new around here.

Check out my soundcloud. If you like anything feel free to go for it.

TheSauceApostle

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It seems I like shyt a little more uptempo than you, so I don't know if our styles will mesh, but here's some beats I think might work for you.

The atmosphere on all of these is dope af, good shyt! I do some uptempo records from time to time, I'll run through your page and give your other beats a listen too

 

[LOST IN THE SAUCE]

The atmosphere on all of these is dope af, good shyt! I do some uptempo records from time to time, I'll run through your page and give your other beats a listen too

Thank you

I never share my shyt so that's good to hear. Lmk what joints you're feeling.

Btw not trying to clog up the thread, if someone wants to explain to me how to DM I'd appreciate it.

 

[Pop123]

Your delivery/voice isn't really for me (others probably feel the same, which is why you may be getting some resistance)...because that aside you get busy, I fux with what you're saying and how you piece it up and all that, I peep all that little technical shyt. Keep grindin kid, you def nice.

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

The next level of lyricism is making the content flow

Some of the stuff holds context in your head, but I feel you need to weave more real life examples

Make it closer than generalizations for some of the content

Dig a little bit deeper, you're below surface, but not below enough

A bit delusional, but great potential, a little bit deeper and less static references

I dont feel enough, you're teaching, but I need to feel the experience, think of a black pastor preaching his ass off on a Sunday.. make it more you



Thats my take

Fasho I respect that, it's a fair take.

 

[Pillmattic]

Fam I ain’t listen yet but if you pushing the line For lyrics I’ll def check you shyt out there was a point where I couldn’t listen to rap 2017-2019 ( ppl talk about em being a vulture shyt there’s way more vultures exploiting gang culture) stuff that would’ve got ppl killed 10-15 years ago in the west so I don’t care if your lyrical miracle aslong as ur not adding to the death and destruction of this culture (that use to have value till ppl let these weirdos in) I promise I’ll listen to your whole project and give u some real feedback

(Sorry I’m getting to deep) I’m on one today lol

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

Your delivery/voice isn't really for me (others probably feel the same, which is why you may be getting some resistance)...because that aside you get busy, I fux with what you're saying and how you piece it up and all that, I peep all that little technical shyt. Keep grindin kid, you def nice.

Yeah I feel you, I definitely got a love/hate type of delivery lol. Respect though, the longer I been rhyming the hungrier I've gotten, the bars ain't going nowhere

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

Done posted almost as many receipts as there are delusional votes Time to up the score



It ain't but nine minutes,
To race the rays of light that gave us life
To our maker's shine, but only on maker's time
Sons of the Sun gon' run... Right outta time
Ain't that a bytch? Can't chase design,
yet a brotha gotta race through space to trace the free-line
A-K-A the beeline from slave to free mind
The path'll start North but banks towards the sky,
Can't land in New York, escape's to be FLY...
Escape the beehive
Escape the roleplay of hopeless Jose,
Escape them old days, escape them three fifths
Escape them three shifts a day I bleed grit
Escape the three-six...


Game ain't but nine innings,
From base to base I raced to scrape a plate called safe,
Them hunger pains gon' wait
Yeah, them hunger pains is gon' wait
Be the typa shyt that make you steal 'til you home-free
Even fukk around and do it when it's no need
That's the love of the paper, the infatuation with imaginations of Joneses
fukk around and get found in Jonestown
Face-down in a crowd of yo pals
Worship that dollar you gon' drown
Keep that eye on the prize, that's an eye on the night
On the brightest of bright, the Northbound
On the brightest of bright, the Northbound...


Circadian rhythms done faded away,
Alien systems of gradient pigments
Arabian crimson, Uranian blue (woah)
A day's not a day, it's a few
The first homosapien waving at PLU.....TO (woah)
These murals I painted with phrase for you?
Huh, they don't pay the due
This one-way ticket ain't for you! Naw...
Self love? That's a dangerous route
Least traveled by the same it suits
A lot've died just to taste the fruits
A lot've died just to gaze the view
'Fo I die, I'ma ride this spaceship to....

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

Fam I ain’t listen yet but if you pushing the line For lyrics I’ll def check you shyt out there was a point where I couldn’t listen to rap 2017-2019 ( ppl talk about em being a vulture shyt there’s way more vultures exploiting gang culture) stuff that would’ve got ppl killed 10-15 years ago in the west so I don’t care if your lyrical miracle aslong as ur not adding to the death and destruction of this culture (that use to have value till ppl let these weirdos in) I promise I’ll listen to your whole project and give u some real feedback

(Sorry I’m getting to deep) I’m on one today lol

100% pushing that line bro, definitely want to hear what you think of the album when you get a chance.

 

[ShaDynasty]

I might be a little biased since we made the project together but I think you're not far off that skill level. All it takes is the right records and approach and more people will see it too.