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Sweet dreams are now forsaken
Such hope I had for us
You'd think that we would make it
but now I've had enough

Heart and soul, I was bare and naked
Until you let me down
I never thought that you would break it
Now I hide when you come around.

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Inside my mind, inside my head
Words flow on a riverbed
Trickling, dripping, flowing drops
I try and try but it never stops

I want peace, I want serene
I want a lake, not a river stream
Always thinking, water logged
Can never seem to clear this fog.

I try to keep my thoughts contained
I wanna go where it never rains
Give me someplace warm and dry
Above the clouds I wanna fly

Towards the sun or desert sands
If I thirst, I know where to land
Right now I just need some reprieve
Don't want to cry, I just want to breathe.
 

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Sweet dreams are now forsaken
Such hope I had for us
You'd think that we would make it
but now I've had enough

Heart and soul, I was bare and naked
Until you let me down
I never thought that you would break it
Now I hide when you come around.

------------

Inside my mind, inside my head
Words flow on a riverbed
Trickling, dripping, flowing drops
I try and try but it never stops

I want peace, I want serene
I want a lake, not a river stream
Always thinking, water logged
Can never seem to clear this fog.

I try to keep my thoughts contained
I wanna go where it never rains
Give me someplace warm and dry
Above the clouds I wanna fly

Towards the sun or desert sands
If I thirst, I know where to land
Right now I just need some reprieve
Don't want to cry, I just want to breathe.

this is nice love how you structure it too. Keep it up mami
 

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bored outta my mind waiting on this damn break tag.

was writing to that Black Angel - Killah priest ft Planet Asia Instrumental


Mental mechanics, melananted angel rhymes etched in granite
Meticulous lyricist from darkness to light lets build on the mathematics of the Atharsis
Dogon , The 9 enneads ..cosmos of dark matter
Cause when define in a manner - summing it up in a sentence
Ignorance is a mere sickness, that nomadic, and illness equivalent to cancer
Radiant gems from divine mind shimmer like lapis

7 bars :manny:
 
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