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Funny,
First time seeing this thread and I'm on my way to a poetry slam.
you write?
lol hmmm you should post somethingNothing impressive. I went to be part of the audience.
Nothing impressive. I went to be part of the audience.
lol hmmm you should post something

Sweet dreams are now forsaken
Such hope I had for us
You'd think that we would make it
but now I've had enough
Heart and soul, I was bare and naked
Until you let me down
I never thought that you would break it
Now I hide when you come around.
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Inside my mind, inside my head
Words flow on a riverbed
Trickling, dripping, flowing drops
I try and try but it never stops
I want peace, I want serene
I want a lake, not a river stream
Always thinking, water logged
Can never seem to clear this fog.
I try to keep my thoughts contained
I wanna go where it never rains
Give me someplace warm and dry
Above the clouds I wanna fly
Towards the sun or desert sands
If I thirst, I know where to land
Right now I just need some reprieve
Don't want to cry, I just want to breathe.
Thanks!this is nice love how you structure it too. Keep it up mami
