URL/SMACK PRESENTS: NU JERZY TWORK VS QLEEN PAPER

Who won

  • NJT

    Votes: 27 81.8%
  • Qleen

    Votes: 6 18.2%

  • Total voters
    33

EA

A Pound & A Prayer
Joined
Jun 22, 2013
Messages
11,378
Reputation
2,955
Daps
42,917
Reppin
London, UK
Idk why not, bars are really the only thing twork has down pact. Everything else is what needs work.

NJT doesn't have bars like that, to me. He's got that herky, jerky writing style like Dot/Gwitty but with annoying "aggression" and without the comedy. No way could he battle someone like B Dot and put on the same performance that Danny did.
 

FreshAIG

Moderator
Staff member
Poster of the Year
Supporter
Joined
May 1, 2012
Messages
71,661
Reputation
17,334
Daps
316,847
Reppin
Californ-i-a by way of BK
I'm not even a huge Danny Myers fan but that's quite the hyperbole. NJT couldn't have half the barfests that Danny has been a part of.
Danny has a lot of bars and most of them are awful. He calls them barfest, I don't lol. Just cause you say a punchline doesn't mean it's good. Danny has a lot of punchlines, and most of them are basic as hell. shyt I would probably scrap if I wrote it.

Twork has great wordplay. Some you can say are "reaches" but most are just fire. His main issue is clarity.
 

FreshAIG

Moderator
Staff member
Poster of the Year
Supporter
Joined
May 1, 2012
Messages
71,661
Reputation
17,334
Daps
316,847
Reppin
Californ-i-a by way of BK
NJT doesn't have bars like that, to me. He's got that herky, jerky writing style like Dot/Gwitty but with annoying "aggression" and without the comedy. No way could he battle someone like B Dot and put on the same performance that Danny did.
His writing is literally NOTHING like dot or Gwitty lol the fukk bro?
 

MicIsGod

They like what that mean
Joined
May 3, 2012
Messages
27,511
Reputation
2,397
Daps
60,640
Reppin
Atl
NJT doesn't have bars like that, to me. He's got that herky, jerky writing style like Dot/Gwitty but with annoying "aggression" and without the comedy. No way could he battle someone like B Dot and put on the same performance that Danny did.
See bdot and Danny was more than a bar fest tho, you're right he can't do that because he doesn't know how to use an angle yet. Bar wise tho, he's a lot more intricate than danny. Which is just hard to say about any new guy. He's going overheads all battle weird delivery or not. Twork is very lyrical his style just isn't very enjoyable to a lot of people on camera.
 

EA

A Pound & A Prayer
Joined
Jun 22, 2013
Messages
11,378
Reputation
2,955
Daps
42,917
Reppin
London, UK
Danny has a lot of bars and most of them are awful. He calls them barfest, I don't lol. Just cause you say a punchline doesn't mean it's good. Danny has a lot of punchlines, and most of them are basic as hell. shyt I would probably scrap if I wrote it.

Twork has great wordplay. Some you can say are "reaches" but most are just fire. His main issue is clarity.

His writing is literally NOTHING like dot or Gwitty lol the fukk bro?

Don't get me wrong, I'm not much of a Danny fan. I'm on record for clowning his writing style but his level of rapping is way better than Twork's.

Twork has a lot of punches that come from no where or punches that literally just connect due to word association. Couple that with his stop-start delivery and it's very similar to Gwitty. Of course his voice is different and his energy is all the way up in comparison but I see the resemblance.

See bdot and Danny was more than a bar fest tho, you're right he can't do that because he doesn't know how to use an angle yet. Bar wise tho, he's a lot more intricate than danny. Which is just hard to say about any new guy. He's going overheads all battle weird delivery or not. Twork is very lyrical his style just isn't very enjoyable to a lot of people on camera.

When I use the term bar fest, I just mean a battle that was heavy in bars and very little filler/antics. I.e Rex vs Yung Ill

As of right now, we haven't seen Twork show the ability to rap about an angle and stick to it for a whole round. I don't classify being overhead as lyrical if the punch is still shyt when you think about it and/or break it down.
 
Last edited:

Ronnie Lott

#49erGang
Joined
Jun 12, 2012
Messages
63,165
Reputation
10,429
Daps
225,552
See bdot and Danny was more than a bar fest tho, you're right he can't do that because he doesn't know how to use an angle yet. Bar wise tho, he's a lot more intricate than danny. Which is just hard to say about any new guy. He's going overheads all battle weird delivery or not. Twork is very lyrical his style just isn't very enjoyable to a lot of people on camera.

Fair enough :ehh:
 

Phillyrider807

My Soundtrack is the second “Carter”
Joined
May 24, 2012
Messages
18,254
Reputation
2,511
Daps
35,523
Reppin
215 Uptown!
Twork 2-1 even though i liked QP better. It's weird.

QP would of won rnd 2 and would of got the battle if it wasn't for the choke. When he came back after the choke he was snapping. But that choke was long as hell and Twork's 2nd wasn't bad. So u gotta give him the 2nd off gp.

QP's 3rd was nice as well but that was twork's best round.
 
Top