URL/SMACK PRESENTS: NU JERZY TWORK VS QLEEN PAPER

[ReasonableMatic]

His writing is literally NOTHING like dot or Gwitty lol the fukk bro?

nikkas don't be listening to Twork breh, SWEAR TO GAWD
Twork's rhymepatterns are original as hell
And the nikka got BARS on top of that

They're just so unorthodox it confuses nikkas.
Either you get used to it and get it or you just wouldn't get it
It's the "Freeway Effect"
When son came out I remember a LOTTA nikkas hated him at first.
But when they finally got used to his voice and his rhymepatterns and
Started understanding how he structured his bars and rhymepatterns they started fukkin with him

I remember buying Philadelphia Freeway and in the booklet of the album it had his rhymes written out.
I remember lookin at the Victim Of The Ghetto lyrics confused
like how these shyts even be rhymin, B
But them shyts FIRE when I play it.

I'll explain it

I was born in west but migrated to north
Remember cold nights grindin' AK in a Taurus
Four door for the stick up boys if they want war
Fiends comin' all night all I heard was four more
Rocks in the cap
When it was jumpin' me and Rell hit dances
You could pick me out the crowd rockin' the cap
But things changed
Cause my man Rell fightin' a body
On State Road where it's so cold
Rockin' his blues
I roll with the ROC
Still trynna rock at a show
shyt ain't like 98', nikkas pockets is low
Which way do I go? - Freeway (Victim Of The Ghetto)

Just look at that shyt
Those rhymepatterns weird as hell, the nikka just be skippin bars to rhyme and bring it back LATER.
but if you LISTEN to them in rhythm it makes sense.
And why does it make sense?
Because Free doesn't WRITE his shyt

What do Twork and Free have in common?
They don't write their shyt down <<<<

Now let's compare it to Twork,
Twork also emphasizes words
Either to let you know where he is in the rhythm of the bar
Or if he's letting you know WHERE he is in the rhymepattern

Toys.. like Andy
They wanna know, would he (Woody) get strapped to a Rocket Ship
NAAH..I need my CHIPS in a bag
And These caps (Andy's Capps)
A peel and pop his shyt
naah..you'll get PISTOLWHIPPED
the other ANDY..
The mill a KNOCK his (MILONAKIS) shyt - Twork vs Dougy

Same way as Freeway, Twork also skips bars to bring the rhymepattern back later.
But he'll let you know WHERE he is in the rhythm of his bars by emphasizing the words.

Not only was it a haymaker.
nikkas really can't deny the talent behind how he
• set it up barwise
• Contructed his rhymepatterns fresh as hell
• And PERFORMED the bar to make it hit outta NOWHERE

Another example of how he uses emphasizing words
His slogan flip against Dougy

We mobb in it
And you blockin
And I don't really mean to cause tension
But fukk a shield
I point around defense / da fence

Spoiler: That's BOB FENCES

Bob's Fence | Ventura and Santa Barbara Fencing Experts

I'm authentic!
When you talk about glocks, it's all written
I'm really wipin prints off the glocks
The CLOTH different! - Twork

He flipped Dougy's slogan dope as hell

You know what it is.
Some nikkas just don't like unorthodox rhymin..

That's cool, it's not for everybody
But don't call that shyt wack cause it clearly ain't.

The nikka be SPAZZING

 

[Mook]

Qp 3-0 cause twerk is trash.

Fake voice, pseudo pg stepping, and being a grown man afraid to show his head.

 

[Kidd Dibiase]

Convinced reasonablematic works for Genius.

 

[DontEemTry]

Some nikkas in here in denial.

This shyt got embarrassin real fast for Qleen. Halfway through the second round I was just hopin Twork would stop coz Qleen was already dead

Look how damn near nobody on that stage even had the heart to look Qleen in his eyes.

Twork even gave him a pity clap in encouragement after the choke

3-0.

Qleen hangin with Rich now

 

[dappadonna]

Not gonna lie, I skipped Twork's rounds after the Queen Latifah line

 

[Perfectson]

Twork


He's different

3-0. And I was hoping qp would have came wit it

 

[Ronnie Lott]

nikkas don't be listening to Twork breh, SWEAR TO GAWD
Twork's rhymepatterns are original as hell
And the nikka got BARS on top of that

They're just so unorthodox it confuses nikkas.
Either you get used to it and get it or you just wouldn't get it
It's the "Freeway Effect"
When son came out I remember a LOTTA nikkas hated him at first.
But when they finally got used to his voice and his rhymepatterns and
Started understanding how he structured his bars and rhymepatterns they started fukkin with him

I remember buying Philadelphia Freeway and in the booklet of the album it had his rhymes written out.
I remember lookin at the Victim Of The Ghetto lyrics confused
like how these shyts even be rhymin, B
But them shyts FIRE when I play it.

I'll explain it

I was born in west but migrated to north
Remember cold nights grindin' AK in a Taurus
Four door for the stick up boys if they want war
Fiends comin' all night all I heard was four more
Rocks in the cap
When it was jumpin' me and Rell hit dances
You could pick me out the crowd rockin' the cap
But things changed
Cause my man Rell fightin' a body
On State Road where it's so cold
Rockin' his blues
I roll with the ROC
Still trynna rock at a show
shyt ain't like 98', nikkas pockets is low
Which way do I go? - Freeway (Victim Of The Ghetto)

Just look at that shyt
Those rhymepatterns weird as hell, the nikka just be skippin bars to rhyme and bring it back LATER.
but if you LISTEN to them in rhythm it makes sense.
And why does it make sense?
Because Free doesn't WRITE his shyt

What do Twork and Free have in common?
They don't write their shyt down <<<<

Now let's compare it to Twork,
Twork also emphasizes words
Either to let you know where he is in the rhythm of the bar
Or if he's letting you know WHERE he is in the rhymepattern

Toys.. like Andy
They wanna know, would he (Woody) get strapped to a Rocket Ship
NAAH..I need my CHIPS in a bag
And These caps (Andy's Capps)
A peel and pop his shyt
naah..you'll get PISTOLWHIPPED
the other ANDY..
The mill a KNOCK his (MILONAKIS) shyt - Twork vs Dougy

Same way as Freeway, Twork also skips bars to bring the rhymepattern back later.
But he'll let you know WHERE he is in the rhythm of his bars by emphasizing the words.

Not only was it a haymaker.
nikkas really can't deny the talent behind how he
• set it up barwise
• Contructed his rhymepatterns fresh as hell
• And PERFORMED the bar to make it hit outta NOWHERE

Another example of how he uses emphasizing words
His slogan flip against Dougy

We mobb in it
And you blockin
And I don't really mean to cause tension
But fukk a shield
I point around defense / da fence

Spoiler: That's BOB FENCES

Bob's Fence | Ventura and Santa Barbara Fencing Experts

I'm authentic!
When you talk about glocks, it's all written
I'm really wipin prints off the glocks
The CLOTH different! - Twork

He flipped Dougy's slogan dope as hell

You know what it is.
Some nikkas just don't like unorthodox rhymin..

That's cool, it's not for everybody
But don't call that shyt wack cause it clearly ain't.

The nikka be SPAZZING

Why don't nikkaz really fukk with Quantam Physics
-Bangz
-Born or other "pen heavy nikkaz"

 

[ReasonableMatic]

Why don't nikkaz really fukk with Quantam Physics
-Bangz
-Born or other "pen heavy nikkaz"

You clearly don't get it breh.
QP and Bangz don't have a flow whatsoever and they just don't have any street feel to them.
Born has a flow but his is way more conventional so they can't be compared whatsoever

Twork is not in THEIR lane, his rhyme structure and set ups are way different than QP and Bangz

The closest comparison you have to Twork is Steams
Who like Twork has A FLOW to support the unorthodox rhymepatterns.
And like Twork also emphasizes words to let you know where he is in the rhymepattern.

They're actually so similar they both even have their own unique bop when they're spittin
Cause that's clearly how they create their flow.
With Twork it's like a lil hop
And with Steams it's a rocking back and forth motion (he even talks like that, peep his interviews lol)

I'll give you an EXACT same example off Steams having an unorthodox haymaker like Twork
And you can check my previous post to see I said the EXACT same thing about how Twork does it

• barwise and rhymepattern wise his setup is unorthodox
• he emphasizes the words to let you know where he's at in the rhythm and set up
• and he PERFORMED the bar to make it hit outta NOWHERE

If I needed u Smoked, my Weed man'll clip sumn
Bud by the Grip, Tucked-In....the Can right next to the Zip, like kids lunches
So play them Games... but not with Steams
This Vegas right ??? Slot Machines...
The Metal get pulled til I hit sumn!! - Steams vs Rum Nitty

(29:33)


That muthafukka LANDED

I've always said Steams is in that Freeway lane
Lemme pull the file to support my argument real quick

If I needed u Smoked, my Weed man clip sumn
Bud by the Grip, Tucked-In....the Can right next to the Zip like kids lunches
So play them Games... but not with Steams
This Vegas right ??? Slot Machines...
The Metal get pulled til I hit sumn

Can soda... Next to the zip... Don't parents ziplock sandwiches for they kids

Steams is kinda like Freeway to me. <<<
When you GET his flow, his rhymes are

And I know you like that bar my nikka, stop PLAYIN
@FreshAIG am I lyin my nikka? (Jai voice)

 

[wizworld]

@ReasonableMatic
I like the Freeway reference. I remember the arguments I used to have about Freeway being nice and it keeps me from participating in the "Steams is trash/Prez Mafia is trash/Twork is trash" arguments. I recently tried to put some of my boys onto Westside Gunn, and they thought he was trash.

Shrill voices mixed with unorthodox rhyme patterns, it's just not for everyone. These guys HAVE a rhythm, but if you can't catch their rhythm it might drive you nuts to the point you think they're just throwing lines together.

 

[Reptile]

Twork >>>>>> Ave

 

[Ronnie Lott]

You clearly don't get it breh.
QP and Bangz don't have a flow whatsoever and they just don't have any street feel to them.
Born has a flow but his is way more conventional so they can't be compared whatsoever

Twork is not in THEIR lane, his rhyme structure and set ups are way different than QP and Bangz

The closest comparison you have to Twork is Steams
Who like Twork has A FLOW to support the unorthodox rhymepatterns.
And like Twork also emphasizes words to let you know where he is in the rhymepattern.

They're actually so similar they both even have their own unique bop when they're spittin
Cause that's clearly how they create their flow.
With Twork it's like a lil hop
And with Steams it's a rocking back and forth motion (he even talks like that, peep his interviews lol)

I'll give you an EXACT same example off Steams having an unorthodox haymaker like Twork
And you can check my previous post to see I said the EXACT same thing about how Twork does it

• barwise and rhymepattern wise his setup is unorthodox
• he emphasizes the words to let you know where he's at in the rhythm and set up
• and he PERFORMED the bar to make it hit outta NOWHERE

If I needed u Smoked, my Weed man'll clip sumn
Bud by the Grip, Tucked-In....the Can right next to the Zip, like kids lunches
So play them Games... but not with Steams
This Vegas right ??? Slot Machines...
The Metal get pulled til I hit sumn!! - Steams vs Rum Nitty

(29:33)


That muthafukka LANDED

I've always said Steams is in that Freeway lane
Lemme pull the file to support my argument real quick



And I know you like that bar my nikka, stop PLAYIN
@FreshAIG am I lyin my nikka? (Jai voice)

This nikka @ReasonableMatic 's breakdown

Trust me I "get it" I appreciate Steams style and stuck with Steams 100 times more. Showoff also has an unorthodox style that I also appreciate. But NJT Can't fukk with him. I gave a detailed breakdown of why I don't fukk with him in earlier posts

 

[Tunez]

I didn't understand a word NJT said

 

[OGBobbyJohnson]

Twork won but some of ya'll are overrating his loss..He wasn't complete garbage..He just rapped his bars while Twork performed his..Qleen seemed to turn up in the 2nd but it seemed his rounds were mad short

Twork's pen is crazy but he's gonna have to have more variations of spitting his rhymes or it's gonna get old real quick & like others said work on his clarity

 

[Momentum]

13:00 the entire URL staff did not react. No one wants that static

 

[Young Fab]

I look at NJT and all deez other new nikkas(except for Ave) like a bunch of Sho Off's, they spit a whole bunch of fancy wordplay that leads to nothing. I get all dis "if ya Queen lie, teeth'll be hangin out" or sum bullshyt like dat, I get all dat bullshyt it just does nothin for me. Is he a We Go Hard nikka? Idk cause I only seen 2 of his battles and I ain't been impressed by either one of em.

I like Qleen, he just wasn't a very good Qleen in dis battle. Da Qleen dat battled Ars kills dis Twerk nikka in every single aspect of battle rap but he was just average in dis one.

Battle was ehh and if I rewatch anything it'll be Qleen's rounds but I more thank likely won't watch again.