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This was how I learned alliteration.
'Pac's lyricism was much more from a poet's point of view rather than a battle rapper or corner freestyler.

haterMy thing on Pac has always been this, and I don't think it's some groundbreaking idea that no one has heard before.
He was powerful lyricist that was a true poet and made great music. Also overrated as a rapper. His forte was making strong and timeless music that resonated with people. Rhyming and emceeing isn't really where his strong point was IMO.

'Hold ya Head' is full of technical skill and gems.... That 2nd and especially 3rd verse though
Verse 1:
I wake up early in the mornin', mind state so military
Suckers fantasizin' pictures of a young brother buried
Was it me, the weed or this life I lead?
If daytime is for suckers then tonight we breathe
Out for all that, knowin' that this world bring drawbacks
Look how they shiver once I deliver these raw raps
Meet me at the cemetery, dressed in black
Tonight we honor the dead, those who won't be back
So if I die, do the same for me, shed no tears
An Outlaw, thug livin' in this game for years
Why worry? Hope to God, get me high when I'm buried
Knowin' deep inside only a few love me
Don't rush me to the gates of heaven
Let me picture for a while, how I lived for my days as a child
I wonder now, how do we outlast?
Always get cash, stay strong if we all mash; hold ya head!
Verse 2:
These felonies be like prophecies, beggin' me to stop,
cause these lawyers gettin money every time they knock us
Snatchin' pockets lyrically, suckers flea when they notice
Switched my name to Makaveli, half the rap game ghost
Exposed foes with my hocus-pocus flows, they froze
Now suckers idolize my chosen blows
And mo' money mean litigatin', mo' playa hatin'
Got a cell at the Pen' for me waitin'; is this my fate?
Miss me with that misdemeanor thinkin', me fall back?
Never that, too much tequila drinkin, we all that
Make them understand me? Hell nah, this ain't my posse
Everyone with me is family, ‘cause everybody's got me
Watch me paint a perfect vision, this life we livin'
Got us all meetin' up in prison
Last week I got a letter from my road dog, written in blood
Sayin', "Please show a playa love", hold ya head! (Hold it!)
Verse 3:
God bless the child that can hold his own
Indeed, enemies bleed when I hold my chrome
Let these words be the last to my unborn seeds
Hope to raise my young nation in this world of greed
Currency means nothin' if you still ain't free
Money breeds jealousy, take the game from me
I hope for better days, trouble comes naturally
Runnin' from authorities 'til they capture me
And my aim is to spread mo' smiles than tears
Utilize lessons learned from my childhood years
Maybe Mama had it all right, rest yo' head
Tradin' conversations all night, bless the dead
To the homies that I used to have that no longer roll
Catch a brother at the crossroads
Plus nobody knows my soul, watchin' time pass
Through the glass of my drop-top Rolls; hold ya head!


u trolling biggie was a one syllable rhymer and had simple rhyme schemes compared to pac.
'Hold ya Head' is full of technical skill and gems.... That 2nd and especially 3rd verse though
This is a pretty long response but most of it is quotes, verses, pictures, and etc...
The majority of the time pac is very simple like in dear mama:
When I was young, me and my mama had beef
17 years old, kicked out on the streets
Though back at the time I never thought I’d see her face
Ain’t a woman alive that could take my mama’s place
Suspended from school and scared to go home, I was a fool
With the big boys breaking all the rules
I shed tears with my baby sister, over the years
We was poorer than the other little kids
And even though we had different daddies, the same drama
When things went wrong we’d blame mama
I reminisce on the stress I caused, it was hell
Huggin' on my mama from a jail cell
And who’d think in elementary, hey
I’d see the penitentiary one day?
And running from the police, that’s right
Mama catch me, put a whoopin' to my backside
And even as a crack fiend, mama
You always was a black queen, mama
I finally understand
For a woman it ain’t easy trying to raise a man*
You always was committed
A poor single mother on welfare, tell me how you did it
There’s no way I can pay you back, but the plan
Is to show you that I understand
You are appreciated
Extremely simple verse, and maybe alive and time rhyme in the 3rd and 4th line but it could be a stretch. Obviously pac has examples where he tries to rhyme alot with internals and etc… However, they are exceptions to his usual simple rhyming, and not on the level of other top tier emcees/lyricist.
This is a pretty objective thing that can be easily seen when looking at his work as a whole and by pacs own admission sometimes:
“How does he stack up against the other heavy-hitters (Jay, Nas and Big) statistically?
First and foremost, he doesn’t rhyme as well. This is a simple fact. Not that Big/Jay/Nas are extremely similar rhyming-wise with Tupac a few steps below:
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Tupac, at a rhyme density score of 0.235 is a notch below BIG, Jay and Nas who scored at 0.29, 0.30 and 0.30 respectively. It’s apparent that:
1) The score of 0.30 (which is pretty close to the overall average of 0.28 in our database) is a pretty good baseline necessary where we can argue that technical proficiency is met. Anything over or under by a significant amount should be carefully looked at contextually. We can start saying Good or Bad based on the 0.28-0.30 score.
2) Tupac just isn’t that good, technically speaking. He’s a notch below the Big 3 objectively speaking.
He had great energy on his tracks but to me his linear raps and weak rhyming make it too hard for me to ever really get into his work. Don’t shoot the messenger! Just link my work and help me build traffic."
Tupac: A Notch Below Technically
So his rhyming density as a whole in 5-6 albums plus albums after his death are below BIG’s rhyme density in 2 albums (the least technical GOAT contender IMO) and below the average rap rhyme density…
Overall he cant comapre to the skills of rakim, kool g rap, blakc thought, canibus, nas, pharoahe monch, eminem, mf doom, AZ, and a plethora of top tier emcees.
For his skills concernign flow there is nothing special. His flow for a good part of his short lived career was pretty simple, repetative, and lacked versatility (not all the time tho). I would suggest checking out martin connor (someone I respect alot for his work) who is a tupac stan, and analyed tupacs flow and rhyme schmese on “Changes” (one of pacs more "techncial" songs). He openely says that he loves tupac and that changes is possibly one of the greatest songs OAT. However when it came to flow even admitted that tupac’s flow is not notable or super great by any measure:
“There doesn’t seem to be any plan to the pace of his rhymes. There is no acceleration or deceleration of phrases (shorter or longer sentences, or more or less of them), any discernable switch between a high number of rhymes and a low number of rhymes. There isn’t even any variation on the couplet structure, which would be somewhat laborious without 2pac’s delivery and strong message.”
“When you combine that uniformity of sentence structure with the predictable rhythme structure of being extremely couplet-heavy, you better understand what I’m trying to describe here – his unfinished, unpolished style.”
“Furthermore, he moves between different modes of rhyming without any sort of transition, and there doesn’t seem to be any overarching, guiding principle to how he’ll move from one rhyme to the next. That is, the pacing of his rhymes – how many he drops, and how intense they are in terms of length and placement – is all over the place, and either not very complex or too complex. For example, he starts off with a couplet and a single-syllable end rhyme”
So tupacs flow was mediocre at times and average at best. Nothing special. This is only tupacs flow. Connor thinks that it is compensated with his delivery and message which to me are his only good strong points. Connor even says:
“But as I said before, I don’t think this reflects negatively on 2pac. This is because that style fits his aggressive message and delivery very well”
Rapper's Flow Encyclopedia - 2pac | The Composer's Corner
Tupac's flow is nowhere near the flow skills of pharoahe monch, AZ, Biggie, Eminem, and etc...

It's all about what moves your soul.
"The big 3" combined could never make a song more socially relevant/powerful as this one
A simple truth>>>>>Technical rhyme scheme jargon.
Next they'll be saying Tyrese is "technically" better than James Brown....his density is greater![]()
This the kind of shyt that allows white folks to come in and appropriate the culture.Bars, technicalities, graphs, and shyt.Much ado about nothing.