A Tragedy in Song: “Hot nikka” by Bobby Shmurda

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A Tragedy in Song: “Hot nikka” by Bobby Shmurda
http://thembwatson.wordpress.com/2014/09/03/a-tragedy-in-song-hot-nikka-by-bobby-shmurda/

About a week ago, as I enjoyed abnormally slow Starbucks Wi-Fi, two young women walked up to my friends and me. They had a question that I did not expect until after it was asked. It was a cultural question composed of so many layers that I doubt they understood. I’m sure they failed to understand ONLY through lack of trying. That one question opened my already ponderous mind to a sea of worrisome thoughts. What was this awful question?

“Hey, can you guys teach us the Shmoney dance?”

Now, before (or after) you chuckle at how ridiculous my predicament was, understand that the song “Hot nikka” had been on my mind for awhile. Not only because of how catchy it was or how infectious the featured Schmoney dance is. See, the song had plagued my thoughts because I couldn’t help but view it differently that most of the 8,000,000+ other viewers of it at the time. A fun song to a hot beat with a smooth dance. A terrible display of poor lyricism. A sign of Hip-Hop’s decline. However it was viewed by most, I’m sure my view was largely different. I saw, and continue to see, the song as a tragedy. It arouses the same emotions as Mufasa’s death in The Lion King or the moment Jack succumbs to the cold Atlantic waters in Titanic. When I first saw the dance and heard the song in a viral Vine video, I expected to criticize the song as idiocy, while simultaneously dancing along to the ignorance. In fact, I did just that. I naturally flowed into the Shmoney Dance and hit it all throughout the song. That is, until I opened my ears as I sometimes do when I listen to this type of music.

I was struck with sadness when I realized that Bobby Shmurda, the originator of the song, in his attempt to create a blazing end-of-summer hit song had actually written one of the saddest songs I had heard in quite awhile. Don’t believe me? Cut the beat and remove the dance. Change the tone a bit and tell me that I’m wrong…

“In Truey, I’m some hot nikka

Like I talk to Shyste when I shot nikkas

Like you seen him twirl then he drop, nikka

And we keep them 9 millis on my block, nikka

And Monte keep it on him, he done dropped nikkas

And Trigger he be wilding, he some hot nikka

Tones known to get busy with them Glocks, nikka

Try to run down and you can catch a shot, nikka

Running through these checks ’til I pass out

And shorty give me neck ’til I pass out

I swear to God, all I do is cash out

And if you ain’t a ho, get up out my trap house”


The first eight lines recount how a 20-year old and his friends routinely kill others. I understand the bravado and machismo praised in hip-hop, so I let these lines slide off my conscience. I’ll get back to them later. What I did find frustrating were the last three lines. The abrupt transition from “murder” to money and sex. No need to even transition or relate these lines to what was said before. Imagining someone writing these lines puzzled me and, in an odd way, invited me into Shmurda’s mind. I wanted to empathize with this dude. The very next line was actually the first line that I really listened to.


“I been selling crack since like the 5th grade

Really never made no difference what the shyt made

Jaja taught me flip them packs and how to maintain

Get that money back and spend it on the same thing

Shorty like the way that I ball out

I be getting money ’til fall out

You talking cash, dog, I goes all out

Shorty love the way that I floss out.”


“I been selling crack since like the 5th grade.” That’s 10, maybe 11 years old. I stopped my Shmoney Dance and just said “Damn.” I thought to myself: “If you turned the beat off and just listened to these words, you would see the tragedy in them.” Whether or not this is HIS reality, I don’t know. But I’m sure that it is someone’s reality. I thought of an article titled “10 Things Your 10 Year-Old Shouldn’t Be Doing” on the site iMom. It made me think about how drastically different Shmurda’s world (or his character’s world) is than what most would consider possible or acceptable (by acceptable, I mean allowed to persist) in America. 10 Year-olds shouldn’t “be drinking sugary drinks” or “have unrestricted access to social media.” This 10 Year-old was selling drugs. To blame a 10 Year-old for his environment would miss the point, which I will get to in a minute.


“Free Greezy though, let all of my dogs out

Momma said no p*ssy cats inside my dog house

That’s what got my daddy locked up in the dog pound

Free Phantom though, let all of my dogs out”


It’s amazing how intimate these lyrics are when you actually ingest them rather than dance them away. Incarceration is a reality in Shmurda’s life. In fact, he’s no stranger to it, having been placed in juvenile detention before. Prison and Jail were not abstract oddities to me growing up either, but the tone with which he recounts loss of a father and friends to the prison system moves me to sadness.


“And bytch if it’s a problem we gon’ gun brawl

Shots popping out the AR

I’m with Trigger, I’m with Rasha, I’m with A-Raw

Broad daylight and we gon’ let them things bark

Tell them nikkas free Meeshie, ho

Some way, free Breezy, ho

And tell my nikkas, Shmurda teaming, ho

Mitch caught a body ’bout a week ago, week ago

fukk with us and then we tweaking, ho – tweaking, ho

Run up on that nikka, get to squeezing, ho – squeezing, ho

Everybody catching bullet holes – bullet holes

nikkas got me on my bully, yo – bully, yo

I’m a run up, put that gun on ‘em – gun on ‘em

I’m a run up, go dumb on ‘em – dumb on ‘em

nikkas got me on that young shyt – young shyt

Got me on that go dumb shyt – dumb shyt”


The rest of the song is a visceral narration of the violence that he and his team gleefully inflict upon their enemies. The upfront nature with which these activities are conveyed show that they are simply a part of his story and not some metaphorical example of machismo and toughness that is integral to hip-hop. I make this distinction because it is often used to dismiss the positive power of hip-hop in teaching literary techniques and, in turn, utilized to condemn the art as nothing more than glorification of real violence. Thus, Bobby Shmurda’s “Hot nikka” is both a problem and a chance to see the road to solutions. It is both garbage rap and a tragedy over catchy beats and an irresistible dance.

If only my view were more popular. If only more people wanted to understand “Hot nikka” and not just the dance that made the song so popular. Maybe then, we’d cry for Bobby and the thousands of youngsters like him as we cried for Simba when he lost his father. Maybe then, we’d root for them to become Kings, of sort, rather than condemn them for simply being lost on a dirty and damaged world that they didn’t create.

If only the dance could tell that story, since the words fell upon deaf ears.

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he's got bars


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Twism why not make a thread about Troy Ave? He's trying to bring something back...
 

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he's got bars


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Twism why not make a thread about Troy Ave? He's trying to bring something back...


there was some thread about them or him touring in an rv, i watched the video, it seemed pretty pathetic and just another example of the degeneracy rap music has come to, he or they isnt bringing back anything

besides that thread i have no idea who the hell him or they are

DJ Hamma and Hishaam are bringing it back tho
 

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The time is for Black's to separate themselves with morally and spiritually degenerates of our race.
We have to make it clear to the world and to them where we stand. We are guided by the strength of our humanity and driven by moral virtue. We are human beings with dignity and we must ostracize members of our race who do not respect themselves and our people.
I'm seeing this more and more everyday. The solution isn't unifying with those that are already spiritual zombies but disbanding from them. The days of trying to get other blacks to respect themselves is over. The time now is for us to go our own way. And if they , meaning the zombies of our race, see the light and change their ways let them prove it to us with humanity and good deed. Otherwise they are our eternal enemy.
 

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fuq anyone who can spend all that time writing that shyt.


let shmurda enjoy his 15 min.

always a hating ass cac or c00n or a jealous nicca hating.

i ain't finna read that shyt. there's bigger problems in the world than worry about bobby's song.
 

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The time is for Black's to separate themselves with morally and spiritually degenerates of our race.
We have to make it clear to the world and to them where we stand. We are guided by the strength of our humanity and driven by moral virtue. We are human beings with dignity and we must ostracize members of our race who do not respect themselves and our people.
I'm seeing this more and more everyday. The solution isn't unifying with those that are already spiritual zombies but disbanding from them. The days of trying to get other blacks to respect themselves is over. The time now is for us to go our own way. And if they , meaning the zombies of our race, see the light and change their ways let them prove it to us with humanity and good deed. Otherwise they are our eternal enemy.
no we don't separate from anyone
we clamp down together because we all face the same problems and we have more power this way
 

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no we don't separate from anyone
we clamp down together because we all face the same problems and we have more power this way
Its been tried for decades. And in truth no one should have to tell blacks to stop destroying themselves. We should hold members of our race accountable for their own actions.
 

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Can we move these whiny ass anti-hip hop diatribes to Free Speech

fukking once a week I gotta hear this fukk belly ache about hip hop music with another 100000 word essay :camby:

STFU, nobody is forcing you to read anything, I'm tired of people getting bent out of shape at anybody wanting to make any criticism of hip hop
 

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STFU, nobody is forcing you to read anything, I'm tired of people getting bent out of shape at anybody wanting to make any criticism of hip hop
And I'm tired of you getting bent out of shape and criticising hip hop...for a poster who makes such well thought out arguments against other shyt, your crusade against hip hop makes me wonder if you're really just some old ass white dude who has a black dude ghostwrite his other posts.

You sound out of touch as fukk
 

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fuq anyone who can spend all that time writing that shyt.


let shmurda enjoy his 15 min.

always a hating ass cac or c00n or a jealous nicca hating.

i ain't finna read that shyt. there's bigger problems in the world than worry about bobby's song.

No black self destruction is the biggest "problem" of our time. But hey if you want to patronize a young black man disrespecting the image of himself and his people go for it. You aren't alone after all his video has over a million views. It really goes to show how such large number of the American populace celebrates the destruction of black men.
The arguements and debates are over.Let the black zombies relish in their own filth and self destruction. If those members of our race want to change their going to have to come at our level. fukk this reach one teach one bullshyt.
 
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