C-Styles "Kryptonite" official video, appreciate the input in advance

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I'd rather listen to Bo Burnham



Ur tone doesn't sound like AZ at all, stop it. A-Zzzzzzz is more like it.
Unless you can lose the river dancing moves, Kim Kardashian-esque sextape revenue streams, interpretive remote videography, and mike sorrentino voice inflections I highly advise you to find a plan B and turn it into a plan A immediately. Ur flow sounds like tony the tiger if he decided to start rapping. And give the K-list video vixens a break until u get some rhythm, it's very awkward looking
 
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The video representation seems to make the song progression more transparent.
 

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I've come far from the "remote control gun" days, this is the latest and barely released it, I can take the "roasting" yall do cuz it only makes me work harder and I have thick skin and i'm a good sport, so hopefully you'll like this one more than my previous work :dj2:


C-Styles - Kryptonite (Official Music Video) - YouTube

I agree with the other person who said your flow and delivery need work. Just wondering, when people say that to you, what do you take it to mean? Because, in my opinion, those are your main problems. Also, since you don't have the type of budget to do flashy videos with whips, vixens and crazy lighting it looks amateurish. You should just do a regular day-in-the-life type of video accompanied by a track where you spit about regular joe stuff.
 
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