C-Styles "Kryptonite" official video, appreciate the input in advance

[fukkyalifestyle]

Alot of dudes taking out they life's frustrations on this dudes career. Ha I mean I love the fukkery and the wolves but some of you are just trying to hard to hate.

Abyway I think you have potential and you obviously have the drive and the work ethic. If you put in a few years I could see you getting better. Now days tho with labels you really gotta have that inside connect that will walk you into labels if you wanna go that route. You can do the independent thing too but that takes alot more time, money etc.

 

[flipn50]

I think you should apologize to Mike Jones and keep it moving, it's hard to listen to your music after you dissed a man you recently took a picture with.

 

[dora_da_destroyer]

see here's the deal with my voice, women love it and men hate it, I dunno, nothing really I can do with that, AZ kinda has the same tone as I do but regardless What can I really do if I was born with it lol

I'm a woman, I hate your voice, flow, cadence, delivery, lyrics, and songs. This is not to clown but to let you know women aren't your demographic either.

 

[Cuban Pete]

I think you should apologize to Mike Jones and keep it moving, it's hard to listen to your music after you dissed a man you recently took a picture with.

I agree with this... if you would just directly apologize to the gawd Mike Jones, all will be forgiven breh, until then you most likely food around here cuz that was a real coward move

 

[C-Styles]

I usually don't like the fukkery your threads starts but...

As other people have said, work on your passion/delivery. Another thing I notice is how you try to please both fans that listens to lyrics and the, so-called, party scene. shyt don't work that way. Your flow on this shyt should be strictly playful and simple. All this syllable, big word, fast flow shyt does not suit the tone you want for this song. Dumb it down a bit and have a fukkin story with your lyrics, not some all-over-the-place shyt that doesn't resonate with anyone that want to enjoy your shyt.

I did this song strictly for performances purposes, just needed a hot trap beat to get the crowd going but I see what you mean though, good observation

 

[Illeye buckmatic]

You sure you did not steal the idea for your song from the song down below?

https://soundcloud.com/reupvonwolfgang/krytonite





#TPC

I got one more rep to give out. I might as well use it for this thread

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Juan da don

 

[C-Styles]

I think you should apologize to Mike Jones and keep it moving, it's hard to listen to your music after you dissed a man you recently took a picture with.

I actually did have a talk with Mike, I got his manager to have him have a talk with me and we cleared things out, It wasn't meant to be disrespectful in the first place

 

[Tom]

since u love Nas and Royce so much then why don't u drop a song where u try to rap like them instead of rapping like ur normal wack self all the time b?

 

[C-Styles]

since u love Nas and Royce so much then why don't u drop a song where u try to rap like them instead of rapping like ur normal wack self all the time b?

cuz I'm not them and actually on trap beats, i took a page out of Royce's flow and kind of made it my own

 

[Jx2]

I still feel like we're all being trolled

 

[Tom]

cuz I'm not them and actually on trap beats, i took a page out of Royce's flow and kind of made it my own

Look, I'm trying to help u not be wack anymore b but you keep getting defensive


I'm only suggesting that you record a track where you basically jack Nas and Royce's swag and see if it still sounds wack, it probably won't I bet


I'm just trying to help u and give u constructive criticism bro. If everyone is saying ur wack then everyone can't be wrong, can they?

We had a whole thread to clown u in, sh1ts tired now. I only want to help rid u of wackness because I feel thats my duty to my brother as a fellow human being





take my advice and I bet the Coli will be praising u the next time u drop a track

 

[Cole Cash]

not like im any musical authority, but if i was an a & r id toss this shyt in the trash. the hook is generic the beat is a dime a dozen and the video is the same as everyone elses.

you have a sound that everyone else as and you are an almagation of every average rapper rolled into a boring package.

do you honestly think this is timeless and worth bumping 10 years from now? No.

Repackage yourself, you are below average at everything you are doing right now. Change your name, change your style, change your production. Unless you get a major cosign you arent going far without some major major marketing which will cost you some serious money.

Right now i myself managed to get two offers from two different people interested in potentially releasing a product from me, off the strength of ONE album. Because i tried to do something NO ONE else is doing and keep in mind, i do NOT rap nor did i have any rappers on my album. You have to innovate, or at least look the part. You have literally nothing to market. Nothing.

Just my opinion

 

[porque]

I actually did have a talk with Mike, I got his manager to have him have a talk with me and we cleared things out, It wasn't meant to be disrespectful in the first place

pop shyt then apologize

@porque fam he kept "gif'able" moments here to a minimum, but maybe you can see something I don't

nah he thoroughly checked this one

 

[50CentStan]

 

[Illeye buckmatic]

I'd rather wait on @AVthaPHARAOH to drop than listen to this

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the dark ages