C-Styles "Kryptonite" official video, appreciate the input in advance

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C-Styles said:
I've come far from the "remote control gun" days, this is the latest and barely released it, I can take the "roasting" yall do cuz it only makes me work harder and I have thick skin and i'm a good sport, so hopefully you'll like this one more than my previous work :dj2:


C-Styles - Kryptonite (Official Music Video) - YouTube
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Gave this an unbiased listen and this shyt was almost as painful to watch as the Nick Berg execution video.. if it doesnt register to you why people are telling you your shyt is corny then you lack the self awareness thats necessary to make it as an artist.

With that said i tip my hat to you for not giving up when the response to your music has been overwhelmingly negative but you're still a snake and a coward for shytting on Mike Jones after he gave you an opportunity :ufdup:
 
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CJVisuals said:
I agree with the other person who said your flow and delivery need work. Just wondering, when people say that to you, what do you take it to mean? Because, in my opinion, those are your main problems. Also, since you don't have the type of budget to do flashy videos with whips, vixens and crazy lighting it looks amateurish. You should just do a regular day-in-the-life type of video accompanied by a track where you spit about regular joe stuff.
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I appreciate the input !
 
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It's gotten to the point where I look forward to C-Styles videos more than Eminem, Weezy or T.I. :bryan:

*about to watch* :popcorn:
 
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@porque fam he kept "gif'able" moments here to a minimum, but maybe you can see something I don't :youngsabo:
 
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I usually don't like the fukkery your threads starts but... :ehh:

As other people have said, work on your passion/delivery. Another thing I notice is how you try to please both fans that listens to lyrics and the, so-called, party scene. shyt don't work that way. Your flow on this shyt should be strictly playful and simple. All this syllable, big word, fast flow shyt does not suit the tone you want for this song. Dumb it down a bit and have a fukkin story with your lyrics, not some all-over-the-place shyt that doesn't resonate with anyone that want to enjoy your shyt.
 
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