Could a "Metal Gear Solid" movie work

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:rudy: you hating on kojima da gawd breh?

Yes and No

He tries to do too much and doesn't really know how write succinct dialogue and everything get repeated even tho it's very clear to everyone.
 

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Person 1: Have you tried buying a donut in the new dounut shop?
Person 2: Dounut shop?
Person 1: Yeah, it's on Fakestreet and is called Don's
Person 2: Where is it located?
Person 1: It's on Fakestreet
Person 2: Fakestreet?
Person 1: Yeah it's a new dounut shop
Person 2. What's it called?
Person 1. Don's

Metal Donut Solid coming in 2018
 

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Person 1: Have you tried buying a donut in the new dounut shop?
Person 2: Dounut shop?
Person 1: Yeah, it's on Fakestreet and is called Don's
Person 2: Where is it located?
Person 1: It's on Fakestreet
Person 2: Fakestreet?
Person 1: Yeah it's a new dounut shop
Person 2. What's it called?
Person 1. Don's

Metal Donut Solid coming in 2018
could it be lost in translation?

i think he knows english though..im pretty sure he writes in english on twitter..maybe im wrong
 

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Person 1: Have you tried buying a donut in the new dounut shop?
Person 2: Dounut shop?
Person 1: Yeah, it's on Fakestreet and is called Don's
Person 2: Where is it located?
Person 1: It's on Fakestreet
Person 2: Fakestreet?
Person 1: Yeah it's a new dounut shop
Person 2. What's it called?
Person 1. Don's

Metal Donut Solid coming in 2018

Sorkin esque:russ:
 

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I love Metal Gear Solid but man those cutscenes could use some editing. Snake is CONSTANTLY asking questions that don't need asking. Characters always contextualize what they're talking about even though the person they're talking to clearly already would know what they're referring to.

In fact, if none of these questions existed in the game, none of the conversations would be affected at all. Most of the replies to these questions would be something to the effect of "No duh Snake" or "What? Did I stutter?"

Once you start paying attention to them it's really hard not to laugh whenever one comes up..



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Person 1: Have you tried buying a donut in the new dounut shop?
Person 2: Dounut shop?
Person 1: Yeah, it's on Fakestreet and is called Don's
Person 2: Where is it located?
Person 1: It's on Fakestreet
Person 2: Fakestreet?
Person 1: Yeah it's a new dounut shop
Person 2. What's it called?
Person 1. Don's

Metal Donut Solid coming in 2018

This reads like Brian Michael Bendis' entire Avengers run.

Sorkin esque:russ:

Who coincidentally happened to cite Sorkin as a huge influence.

Kojima writing is more like over-exposition though.

"The Target Console Nucleus was an organization from the 50's responsible for the Dead Chain Protocol, leaving hundreds of terrorized citizens in permanent mental flux, that energy being harvested and injected into the brain of a single man."
"Don't tell me..."
"That's right, George Quintly, president of the Humane Electric Liberator Lounge. H.E.L.L., one of the benefactors that supplied atomic bombs to the Russians during the '73 Turkey riots. Riots which were started over the unlawful execution of Abdul Da-labaleb, a private engineer but also, Target Console Nucleus' chief of fiances."
"!"
 

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This reads like Brian Michael Bendis' entire Avengers run.



Who coincidentally happened to cite Sorkin as a huge influence.

Kojima writing is more like over-exposition though.

"The Target Console Nucleus was an organization from the 50's responsible for the Dead Chain Protocol, leaving hundreds of terrorized citizens in permanent mental flux, that energy being harvested and injected into the brain of a single man."
"Don't tell me..."
"That's right, George Quintly, president of the Humane Electric Liberator Lounge. H.E.L.L., one of the benefactors that supplied atomic bombs to the Russians during the '73 Turkey riots. Riots which were started over the unlawful execution of Abdul Da-labaleb, a private engineer but also, Target Console Nucleus' chief of fiances."
"!"

Yeah Bendis is clearly a fan of Sorkin..shyt I am too
 
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