I already gave the template.
Stop wasting paragraphs and cheesy funny messages to women.
If they find you attractive you can say Hi, and they will reply.
While your writing that ,
Hey nice profile, saw your interested in rap as well what's your favorite artist.
Some breh is just saying nice ass and getting a lol thanks im Sarah my bbm is .
Stop with the corny msgs and long drawnout ish.
This applies to texting too. I refuse to be anybody's text buddy. If a chick isn't trying to meet up then

thru out the "hey" BS and actually said some witty lines and i'm actually getting convo. off some of these chicks
I see...
...and yes she just gave me her address but still doesn't know my name.

on pof though, im tempted to try this shyt now I never did the online dating thing.