Let me know if my music is trash... Peace&LoveAlways

ShaDynasty

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The beat reminds me of some budget early 00's type shyt, its not good. The rhyme scheme with Jimmy Fall-i-on etc was a bad idea but your voice and delivery is actually solid and confident.

How long have you been making music for?
 
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Imagine a woman spitting your lyrics. Same energy. Weak and fakkity. You sound white and you keep sayin "bytch" like a female. Wack ad-libs and you are about 15 years behind sound wise.

Try again. You can't change your race... but you can find your wack ass lane* (edit). make your wack ass cac lane great again.
 

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Nah don't refer to ya music as trash, its solid, keep improving on ya writing
 

Omar Little

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Challyenge :russ: Fallyon:mjlol:Baliance :comeon:

Nah I like your rhyme schemes the Multis, and punchlines but work on your flow for real and change it up. Just kind of the same all the way thru.
 
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