Rate & critique my new EP demo ----> NoDotWon x Piris Reis (@nahnah) - "NoDotted Lines"

[newworldafro]

Quality.

 

[richaveli83]

This the demo of my new EP, if you got 20 minutes to spare over the weekend lmk what you think

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[TEKBEATZ]

Appreciate the ratings breh I'm getting a better sense of the consensus on the project

If u cut the last 3 it will be a very dope EP

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

Quality.

Appreciate y'all llistening

If u cut the last 3 it will be a very dope EP

I'm highkey thinking of cutting "Stop The Show", I'll see if a new hook will save it before I do though

 

[IllmaticDelta]

Nice. I feel it overall with my fav tracks being:

stop the show
truly
got a plot
rakim

 

[NormanConnors]

Just starting this now breh/thanks for the tag

Off top Rakim

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

Just starting this now breh/thanks for the tag

Off top Rakim

All good, look forward to hearing what you think of the tape

 

[I AM WE ARE]

Yo I'm digging this

 

[Stir Fry]

Truly
Got a Plot
Sinai Ryhmes
Dreamcatchers
You Know Who You Are
Take It (My fave track)


As far as sequencing, I'd maybe put Dreamcatchers after Payback?


Hearing a whole lot of growth, keep gassing it breh

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

Yo I'm digging this

Truly
Got a Plot
Sinai Ryhmes
Dreamcatchers
You Know Who You Are
Take It (My fave track)


As far as sequencing, I'd maybe put Dreamcatchers after Payback?


Hearing a whole lot of growth, keep gassing it breh

Means a lot to hear that bruh you been listening since I started posting music here

 

[NormanConnors]

Took a ride listening to this


Rakim is still my fav tied with Take it

Along with

Truly

Sinai Rhymes (that sample flip)

Payback

You know who you are
Stop the show


I rock with the whole tape, only criticism I can add is that maybe the sequencing of the tracks could be a bit different, moods seemed to change too sporadically rather than transition smoothly. But that really didnt bother me tho.

 

[Stir Fry]

@nahnah really did his thing on this too. Props breh

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

Took a ride listening to this


Rakim is still my fav tied with Take it

Along with

Truly

Sinai Rhymes (that sample flip)

Payback

You know who you are
Stop the show


I rock with the whole tape, only criticism I can add is that maybe the sequencing of the tracks could be a bit different, moods seemed to change too sporadically rather than transition smoothly. But that really didnt bother me tho.

I feel what you saying about the moods shifting, might need an interlude or two to make the transitions a little more natural at times.

Appreciate you listening frfr!

@nahnah really did his thing on this too. Props breh

He really did...

Also since both of y'all fukked with "Take It", was gon say I just added the 2nd verse to it. It's one of my favorites on the project too, lmk if y'all like what I did with it

 

[Stir Fry]

I feel what you saying about the moods shifting, might need an interlude or two to make the transitions a little more natural at times.

Appreciate you listening frfr!



He really did...

Also since both of y'all fukked with "Take It", was gon say I just added the 2nd verse to it. It's one of my favorites on the project too, lmk if y'all like what I did with it

You elevated on that second half

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

You elevated on that second half

Just need to tweak the mix a little and its there

EDIT: Just fixed it