Rate My First Beat

[Address_Unknown]

It's a bit all over the place and makes me wanna listen to shyt like this since it sounds like that is what you might have been going for. I ain't got much advice since I'm not musically inclined, but I'd like to hear what new shyt you come up with. Best of luck to you on this, breh.

 

[TallMan_J]

I've never been a hater/downer, but I'm a realist. It isn't horrible, but it damn sure isn't something you would catch me vibing to. It has no rythym and is very random. Cymbals all over the place. Keep working at it and you'll get better. Don't post another beat until you work on your craft some more, or Imma roast yo ass.

 

[RoyalQ]

Trash sorry. Way to convoluted. It had no flow that we can follow and bump too. There was one continuous beat but a bunch of constantly changing beats around it.

 

[NoMorePie]

Too much was going on, clean it up a bit and come back to us

 

[Larry Lobster]

 

[Menelik II]

Be honest (savage) if you have too

that beat is like Broner feet.

Seriously, its kinda all over the place. is it even 4 x 4? its kinda sounds like it is but its very hard tell and hard to follow where the first beat of the bar is as you have so many different chords coming in. This could have been just about passable, but with such an irregular beat pattern too its impossible to know whats going on. As is, it sounds like experimental electronica - but it isn't sonically bad just erratic.

Even the craziest Aphex twin you can catch where the beat is.

 

[Indiglow Meta (R$G)]

Send me your drumless stems, breh.
I like where you were going.
Drum placement was... Incompatible.

 

[SmokyQuartz]

Send me your drumless stems, breh.
I like where you were going.
Drum placement was... Incompatible.

You want the drum kit i used? idk what a drum stem is

 

[Indiglow Meta (R$G)]

You want the drum kit i used? idk what a drum stem is

Naw I don't want those drums, I want the chords. Drumless, no drums.

 

[Prince Mongo]

You got a VERY long way to go as far as learning music theory. Do you know what a 4/4 time signature is? Everything was just so off beat, I couldn't stand it. If you're really serious about learning how to make beats (specifically on FL Studio), look up Busy Works Beats on YouTube. You have to start somewhere, so I'll give you credit for trying

 

[YeahN1ggaImmaLurker!]

Not too bad for you're first beat. The drums doin too much you can't bob ya head to it. Keep practicing

 

[bangbreh]

Even the craziest Aphex twin you can catch where the beat is.

That is so far beyond his pay grade
But I mean if you can't figure out ^^ this ^^ song then you really need to sit down with somebody or watch a tutorial
Needs to get a concept of structure and basic math.
Dudes just out here blown off trees throwin obscure organ sounds here and there on some shyt.

 

[Knowledge]

it sounds like literal trash breh. Like imagine what an actual aluminum gargabe can full of trash sounds like being knocked over and rolling down the Manhattan streets breh.

 

[SmokyQuartz]

Naw I don't want those drums, I want the chords. Drumless, no drums.

Can just sample the chords? idk how else to give you them FL Studio is not letting me open the file for some reason ( Lounge lizard won't load i think they found out i pirated it )

 

[cjlaw93]

U gotta be a cac breh