Why not. He’s on record saying he doesn’t know how to actually write a song (structure, bridge, chorus, etc) and he doesn’t care about production. Stuff like Mural is the definition of lyrical miracle. It has no artistic meaning, no thematic worth or narrative. Instead it’s essentially a bunch of double entendres and similes connected together like a puzzle, for the sole intention of you (the listener) googling until you “understand” it. It’s the highest height of corny lyrical miracle shyt. Play that for Biggie and he’d slap you. Play it for a chick and she’d never have sex with you.
Being lyrical is about more than making clever references to pop culture. And it’s certainly not about rapping from the perspective of a hamburger. The standard for what makes rap lyrical should be similar to the standards used to judge good writing or prose in general. Emotional depth, poetic flare, vocabulary, clever wordplay…the ability to translate complex thought into simple, clear language.
I want to feel something when I listen to rap. I want to learn about the author/rapper. With Lupe I instead hear the bitterness of a nerd constantly trying to belittle the “hood” dudes who clowned him his whole life.
Excellent post but allow me to retort on a few things. I'm a lupe fan he has the ability to make songs with emotional depth and albums with complete cohesive narratives.
However he does like to rap or make things over complicated at times just for the sake of doing so. That's an accurate take. Some of his fans like that.
Murals is just lyrical flexing for the fukk of it. Jay z did it with lyrical exercise. Neither song had a point other than to show I m nice. That was their goal and they achieved that. Difference is Jay wouldn't put that on an album (just a bonus) but point still stands.
You say play it for Big and he'd slap you (I'm a big pun Intended Big fan) and I think he's a MUCH better artist than lupe...but why is his view the standard? Also you don't play lupe to get chicks to fukk lol. Im married and not out there like that but I'd imagine you'd play Drake or some shyt. You wouldn't place Face (ghost or brad) to get chicks in the mood...but that criteria doesn't define their greatness.
The part you mention about judging prose is all opinion. Jay z once said "Lyrics is just what you like" and I agree with him. Let's take pulp fiction writers like Dean Koontz and Stephen King. The former usually writes in really long musically sounding sentences (you can hear a poetic touch under the words) while King typically writes in a very straightforward way. Which is better is just preference. Or take Ta Nehisi Coates and Balwdin....same thing one is much more dense and wordy and one is much more "simple". Does that make one better?
To me what Lupe lacks is what Nas did on KD 2. You could tell Nas cheif aim was to make dope songs and a dope album. If that meant a simpler line or letting the beat breath he did that. My Goats like Nas Jay or Face have the ability to be incredible simple (at times) and have a huge lyrical impact. Thats a different skill but I'm not sure its a "better skill" though its probably harder.
My take anyway.
Signed a guy who thought Dinosaurs was pointless lyrical miracle shyt from LU but I still enjoyed the bars.