Essential The Official Battle Rap Random Thoughts Thread (URL, KOTD, UW etc...)
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it was close until the third. RD got that. Good battle, tho
FreshABM
Dollaz make Sense $$ ABM Commas After My Commas
Yeah go head pick one random line and say Bmagic lost because of that. Do you want me to quote how many DRY lines Real Deal said? Your hero did ok but better than Bmagic HA.
Bmagic's first round were ALL BARS I typed some of it there is no way Real Deal won that first round.
At his crib I did a # on his door now thats a address. Im talking with that hollow toast like bad breath. This motherfucca a teacher well you a student now, Im that one nikka that you warned your kids at that school about, prove your wild hit your class neck shot, good shooting, left his red apple on the desk like a good student.
Ill leave real deal in a holy field when i kill shyt, you gonna need permission to slip you on a field trip
Knock him out then I drug Deal... like a Hustler.nikka I aint doing Real good like a struggler
It mustang when I fire birds like a sports car.
You looking like im not the shyt nikka change your face, I bet your students used to woop your ass to make you change the grade, Bang the K when I give him shots its not tanqueray, Cut him when I come after deal like a game of spades.
Magic was great in the first, but Deal was better 
At some point the same wordplay gets a little tired....and I'm pretty much over almost all this associative "wordplay" like that firebirds/mustangs/sportscar shyt....doesn't make any sense
Real Deal's first:
Magic/Dream/Shaq/Hardaway
RNT/Thanks for making the exception
Sandlot dog/yard with ToTo
Bird perched on my wood like the Cardinals logo
Put Magic in the air like a beautiful night
I can't wait for June to get here
The bar/beer scheme...this rounds on me
Your bytch put cheese on the cracker, so I'm heading to the Ritz to pound
Outline Black if you bold
Real Deal's actually had angles/schemes beyond just random bars/name flips
At some point the same wordplay gets a little tired....and I'm pretty much over almost all this associative "wordplay" like that firebirds/mustangs/sportscar shyt....doesn't make any sense
Real Deal's first:
Magic/Dream/Shaq/Hardaway
RNT/Thanks for making the exception
Sandlot dog/yard with ToTo
Bird perched on my wood like the Cardinals logo
Put Magic in the air like a beautiful night
I can't wait for June to get here
The bar/beer scheme...this rounds on me
Your bytch put cheese on the cracker, so I'm heading to the Ritz to pound
Outline Black if you bold
Real Deal's actually had angles/schemes beyond just random bars/name flips
On the other side, Magic
New kicks, I have him run in those/runny nose like an allergy
You would/wood get stomped/stump like the bottom of a tree
Real eyes/realize/real lies
Magic drops so many punches that some are obviously going to miss, but he was hardly dropping anything EPIC
Now, I didn't really like either of their 2nd rounds...because I don't really care for the "last battle you said...." shyt. Deal did it a little better than most...but I still don't really like that angle.
The shove in your box response was nice.
And the fact that Magic spit "I'm a fukking boss like a secretary" after RD called him out for those kind of bars was pretty funny
New kicks, I have him run in those/runny nose like an allergy
You would/wood get stomped/stump like the bottom of a tree
Real eyes/realize/real lies
Magic drops so many punches that some are obviously going to miss, but he was hardly dropping anything EPIC
Now, I didn't really like either of their 2nd rounds...because I don't really care for the "last battle you said...." shyt. Deal did it a little better than most...but I still don't really like that angle.
The shove in your box response was nice.
And the fact that Magic spit "I'm a fukking boss like a secretary" after RD called him out for those kind of bars was pretty funny
FreshABM
Dollaz make Sense $$ ABM Commas After My Commas
Magic was great in the first, but Deal was better
At some point the same wordplay gets a little tired....and I'm pretty much over almost all this associative "wordplay" like that firebirds/mustangs/sportscar shyt....doesn't make any sense
Real Deal's first:
Magic/Dream/Shaq/Hardaway
RNT/Thanks for making the exception
Sandlot dog/yard with ToTo
Bird perched on my wood like the Cardinals logo
Put Magic in the air like a beautiful night
I can't wait for June to get here
The bar/beer scheme...this rounds on me
Your bytch put cheese on the cracker, so I'm heading to the Ritz to pound
Outline Black if you bold
Real Deal's actually had angles/schemes beyond just random bars/name flips
How does the fire bird mustang line not make any sense?? Maybe it just doesn't make sense to YOU. the dream team line was nice the Cardinals logo line
are you serious? that shyt is random and ANY1 could say that basic shyt. That shyt was wack. The bar/beer scheme was decent nothing hotter than Bmagic's first round. Can't wait till June to get here?? Magic's isn't a Junior more random shyt and it still wasn't hotter than Magic's teacher schemes and name flips in that first round. Cracker line was also nice. Real Deal's first round was AVERAGE.
FreshABM
Dollaz make Sense $$ ABM Commas After My Commas
On the other side, Magic
New kicks, I have him run in those/runny nose like an allergy
You would/wood get stomped/stump like the bottom of a tree
Real eyes/realize/real lies
Magic drops so many punches that some are obviously going to miss, but he was hardly dropping anything EPIC
Now, I didn't really like either of their 2nd rounds...because I don't really care for the "last battle you said...." shyt. Deal did it a little better than most...but I still don't really like that angle.
The shove in your box response was nice.
And the fact that Magic spit "I'm a fukking boss like a secretary" after RD called him out for those kind of bars was pretty funny
The lines your quoting are B magics SETUPS and their still fuccin PUNCHES. Your riding hard on me saying it was epic. Regardless Bmagic's first round was BETTER than Real Deal's point blank period. I mean IDK IDK about the streets or nothing.
They wasn't laughing with Real Deal, they were laughing AT him 
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"It must sting when I fire birds....like a sports car" <---- beyond the associative wordplay, it makes ZERO SENSE. It hurts when I shoot you like a sports car
ZERO SENSE MADE.
This isn't a shot at Magic, because TONS of people use this same shyt. I couldn't stand Chilla's battle against Cash because of it.
The bar has to make sense beyond the words relating to each other. Otherwise it's just nonsense. The stretched wordplay should be a bonus...not the point of the bar.
OH shyt, and I just caught Real Deal's closer that Smack cut off
"Aight then.....better go home and tell em I'm light skinned"
"It must sting when I fire birds....like a sports car" <---- beyond the associative wordplay, it makes ZERO SENSE. It hurts when I shoot you like a sports car
ZERO SENSE MADE.This isn't a shot at Magic, because TONS of people use this same shyt. I couldn't stand Chilla's battle against Cash because of it.
The bar has to make sense beyond the words relating to each other. Otherwise it's just nonsense. The stretched wordplay should be a bonus...not the point of the bar.
OH shyt, and I just caught Real Deal's closer that Smack cut off
"Aight then.....better go home and tell em I'm light skinned"
The lines your quoting are B magics SETUPS and their still fuccin PUNCHES. Your riding hard on me saying it was epic. Regardless Bmagic's first round was BETTER than Real Deal's point blank period. I mean IDK IDK about the streets or nothing.
Set-ups have to set something up. A weak punchline followed by a better punchline isn't a set-up
FreshABM
Dollaz make Sense $$ ABM Commas After My Commas
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"It must sting when I fire birds....like a sports car" <---- beyond the associative wordplay, it makes ZERO SENSE. It hurts when I shoot you like a sports car
This isn't a shot at Magic, because TONS of people use this same shyt. I couldn't stand Chilla's battle against Cash because of it.
The bar has to make sense beyond the words relating to each other. Otherwise it's just nonsense. The stretched wordplay should be a bonus...not the point of the bar.
OH shyt, and I just caught Real Deal's closer that Smack cut off
"Aight then.....better go home and tell em I'm light skinned"
How doesn't that make sense?? Must sting( must hurt) when I fire birds( when i shoot bullets) like a sports car. Its the play on words Mustang(must sting) and firebirds which we know are both sports cars. That shyt was hard to me.
FreshABM
Dollaz make Sense $$ ABM Commas After My Commas
I know they are sports cars and I get that it's a play on words....but the punchline DOESN'T MAKE SENSE. It's no longer a simile. It's just lazy wordplay that TONS of battlers are resorting to now.
It must hurt when I shoot bullets like a sports car.
That does not make sense. At all.
Most of his wordplay is dope though, or at least decent...which makes garbage like this standout.
FreshABM
Dollaz make Sense $$ ABM Commas After My Commas
its a metaphor of course when you say it like that it doesn't make sense. Thats why its hot because he MADE it make sense by the way he put it together.It's not a metaphor. It not making sense "like that" is why it's a shytty bar.
It'd be better to finish it off with "AT his sports car"...
It hurts when I shoot bullets at his car.....that actually makes sense, and only makes the wordplay better.
Or "It mustang when I firebirds at his legacy".....
It'd be better to finish it off with "AT his sports car"...
It hurts when I shoot bullets at his car.....that actually makes sense, and only makes the wordplay better.
Or "It mustang when I firebirds at his legacy".....
I get what HHR is saying...
"It must hurt when I shoot bullets like a sports car."
even though there's mad metaphor in that play, the overall line doesn't make sense when you read it directly...
but in my opinion, what makes it ok to do that is because usually the next sentence will rhyme with that....
but overall though, B-Magic once again came through with the clever wordplay...dude is too clever...
real deal is mad corny
"he's turning blue, I guess he's really crippin now"
"I seen him talking sh*t on twitter though, I started fuming with a 5th near, I can't wait for June to get hear"
the way he said that sh*t was corny as hell....
if he gets rid of that corny sh*t he be saying....he'd be dope...cause he did say some dope sh*t throughout the battle
"It must hurt when I shoot bullets like a sports car."
even though there's mad metaphor in that play, the overall line doesn't make sense when you read it directly...
but in my opinion, what makes it ok to do that is because usually the next sentence will rhyme with that....
but overall though, B-Magic once again came through with the clever wordplay...dude is too clever...
real deal is mad corny
"he's turning blue, I guess he's really crippin now"
"I seen him talking sh*t on twitter though, I started fuming with a 5th near, I can't wait for June to get hear"
the way he said that sh*t was corny as hell....
if he gets rid of that corny sh*t he be saying....he'd be dope...cause he did say some dope sh*t throughout the battle