Essential The Official Battle Rap Random Thoughts Thread (URL, KOTD, UW etc...)
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Fam!!
Since you let it be known this is an extra important battle for you I got a review for you breh
First off, the bars are there.
Them nameflips
Be aware that If you get into URL, they'll immediately put you in the pen-category
So since you're a pen nikka I'll adress other things you prolly won't hear as much as the quality of your bars.
Rd1: lemme adress attributes
We all know pen nikkas gotta get aggression/deliver/stage presence as soon as possible when exposed to the masses
Pen+aggression: Lux, Nitty, Ave,
Pen+delivery: B Magic, Lux, Ave,
Pen+stage presence: Lux, Conceited, Ave, (JC, but he only has it on small rooms)
• delivery/performance
If he don't skid, he can talk to the Hawk like X-Game (stab movement connect to a aggressive line)
I'm highlighting that because if you have moments like those in the future.
The fans will add aggression points to your attribute.
Lemme explain
It's not that X plain, but he reached his plateau
I'm flyin over X plane (flyin over him movement)
You stumbled slightly over 2nd bar (got it back ASAP, salute).
But what I wanna adress is the slight pause before the "I'm flyin over X plane"
That execution was flawless.
Danny Myers' Lima Bean / Time Machine bar vs Nitty is an example of him executing and hitting that way
Those two parts in the 1st you delivered and performed very well
During Xcel's rd you gotta watch how you acknowledge his good material in his rd's
Woulda been enough compared to a full headnodKeep in mind Xcel has a fanbase and he's more known. So fans of an already established artist will try to use those things to be on some "yeah, Xcel is winning this round type shyt
"Rd 2: I see you using the angle approach, dope how you acknowledged him getting uncomfortable.
On some "I see you
" that's that stage presence shytDelivery on the disappear / magic sequence was smooth.
You got a bit in his space on that X-clan bar goin into calling out his camp
(Lemme find out you got bully potential
)That NORE / Drink champs bar was FIRE my dude!!!
I think that might've been a barstructure learning process moment.
It prolly woulda harder in the room if you would've put it in the 4th bar but cotdamn
I got my whole team with me
*turns around*
: UHUH!!!I came with a SQUAD
Masked up with them sticks, like we playin lacrosse
nikka?!
That was Shotgun Suge / Head Ice vs Goodz type shyt my nikka 
Even the shyt talk after that, now THAT was a moment right there breh
My TBZ nikkas, @RAW_SPK showin out on this nikka
That Future/MaskOff/Molly/Percocet sequence delivered very well
Chris Unbias just dropped a new Untold Truth but I'mma holla at him about your battle breh
#ColiGang
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Speaking of which, his new album with Willie B dropped, too. Not bad at all.
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Fam!!
Since you let it be known this is an extra important battle for you I got a review for you breh
First off, the bars are there.
Them nameflips
Be aware that If you get into URL, they'll immediately put you in the pen-category
So since you're a pen nikka I'll adress other things you prolly won't hear as much as the quality of your bars.
Rd1: lemme adress attributes
We all know pen nikkas gotta get aggression/deliver/stage presence as soon as possible when exposed to the masses
Pen+aggression: Lux, Nitty, Ave,
Pen+delivery: B Magic, Lux, Ave,
Pen+stage presence: Lux, Conceited, Ave, (JC, but he only has it on small rooms)
• delivery/performance
If he don't skid, he can talk to the Hawk like X-Game (stab movement connect to a aggressive line)
I'm highlighting that because if you have moments like those in the future.
The fans will add aggression points to your attribute.
Lemme explain
It's not that X plain, but he reached his plateau
I'm flyin over X plane (flyin over him movement)
You stumbled slightly over 2nd bar (got it back ASAP, salute).
But what I wanna adress is the slight pause before the "I'm flyin over X plane"
That execution was flawless.
Danny Myers' Lima Bean / Time Machine bar vs Nitty is an example of him executing and hitting that way
Those two parts in the 1st you delivered and performed very well
During Xcel's rd you gotta watch how you acknowledge his good material in his rd's
Keep in mind Xcel has a fanbase and he's more known. So fans of an already established artist will try to use those things to be on some "yeah, Xcel is winning this round type shyt
Rd 2: I see you using the angle approach, dope how you acknowledged him getting uncomfortable.
On some "I see you
Delivery on the disappear / magic sequence was smooth.
You got a bit in his space on that X-clan bar goin into calling out his camp
(Lemme find out you got bully potential
That NORE / Drink champs bar was FIRE my dude!!!
I think that might've been a barstructure learning process moment.
It prolly woulda harder in the room if you would've put it in the 4th bar but cotdamn
I got my whole team with me
I came with a SQUAD
Masked up with them sticks, like we playin lacrosse
nikka?!
Even the shyt talk after that, now THAT was a moment right there breh
My TBZ nikkas, @RAW_SPK showin out on this nikka
That Future/MaskOff/Molly/Percocet sequence delivered very well
Chris Unbias just dropped a new Untold Truth but I'mma holla at him about your battle breh
#ColiGang
Why was this breakdown so accurate though?! My nikka i appreciate you and the feedback and breakdown #ColiGang
There's detail with your "masked up with the sticks" delivery that I believe was the critical reason that it shook the room. You turned all the way around and delivered that bar to the stage while exaggerating the fukk out of the motion. My guess is that you practiced the mask-down motion, but you were in the moment so heavy that you extra performed it. That seizing the moment shyt (if I'm right) is what gets viewers and fans feeling like they want to fight. If you can get attuned to noticing when you got the room "primed," you can sell a B+ type bar and rock the joint.
As for how to get attuned to that..
foh nikka you the one battling why you askin me
-When is Adhi Boom gettng out?
-TODD's Untold Truth makes me dislike him more. I don't even know why lol. He also has a ton of BAD HORRIBLE Main Stage battles.
-Dot still killed Bill Collector.
-Ro vs. Goodz needs to happen
-TODD's Untold Truth makes me dislike him more. I don't even know why lol. He also has a ton of BAD HORRIBLE Main Stage battles.
-Dot still killed Bill Collector.
-Ro vs. Goodz needs to happen
-When is Adhi Boom gettng out?
-TODD's Untold Truth makes me dislike him more. I don't even know why lol. He also has a ton of BAD HORRIBLE Main Stage battles.
-Dot still killed Bill Collector.
-Ro vs. Goodz needs to happen
Id retire battling goodz tbh
Why hollow not get you a pg my nikka? Norbes on his dikk heavy.
Hollow telling me to come up to NY wit him for Summer Madness. Tryna plan that now. I dont really like latching on to other nikkas to help me out so I aint been begging Hollow to put me on. He been talking to url though trust.
Still waiting for that TBZ shout out tho
I shouted out TheColi in the beginning lol
Good shyt! Appreciate ya bruh