Do YOU work for a major news media or major publication??? Do you have a body of work I can view and give my opinion on... Because if all you have is Gramatical Errors to base MY entire article on as a negative, you can GTFOH...
and I say that with all due respect. You sound like a knowitall.
I will only get better with time...
If you would like to write on my site let me know thru pmNo I'm not an author. But it's just basic grammar. And you continue to not recognize that. I can rework that whole article into something that resembles professionalism. Maybe I am a little too harsh. But hey, better me then some major publisher who will probably wonder if you are slow if you submit work like that
I'll be your editor@The G.O.D II easy constructive criticism is cool. But not straight out attacking. I take full responsiblility for the review. @ORDER_66 helped out and he asked me to read it before posting, as I do for everything posted on the site. I skimmed thru it and yes there are mistakes I overlooked. I do need an editor to help. If anyone would like to help read over articles/pieces before they are posted on my site that would be great. @Kamikaze Revy i try breh.
Breh you shouldn't need an editor to write something following basic rules of grammar. Horizon is dope but let's let this be your first and last reviewI didn't have an editor and it's my first article.You sound like a fukking Grammar Nazi and you are showing your bias instead of taking the article at face value...
Whatever you don't like it because of errors when you can read it plain as day...
Why don't you do better?I mean you stan the xbox so anything you say gotta be taken with an ounce of salt.
My last review, nikka I'm gonna keep writing and you can't do shyt to stop me.
the revised version is better. I got a little program to google docs proofread and help editor and everything also got ms word 07 on deck.Props Breh you stole my job
I JUST wrote a review for horizon for fteswl 
Props Breh you stole my job
Im not a writer but I will say this you spoiled a ton of stuff from the story line, I know most people played it by now but seriously you put major plot spoilers all up in their.
Besides the spoilers and grammar issues I actually liked the review, you went with a more narrative critique while mine focused on gameplay and mechanics and was more akin to a consumers guide.
@LinusCaldwell did I lose my job for repeatedly missing deadlines
Look where he's at now thoYall treating da homie @ORDER_66 as bad as we use to treat Rob Littall back on the
