I love the detail with Alicia being an undead. It isn't some magic that makes her undead, but it is Klen's dark ichor. It really shows that Alicia is at his mercy. I do love how Klen is being characterized because he really feels like a god monster that doesn't understand humanity. Which brings up Alicia's point of this story being important. Alicia's role is to bridge the gap between Klen and humanity. Not too surprised he tells Alicia to wipe them out and literally figure it out basically.
Carme clearly cares about Neruru. Though you do see a sense of her caring about her own self-interest first. It very much feels more authentic. As she is upset Neruru got asked to leave before her, she imagines who will eventually become the wet nurse if Neruru dies.
One would have thought Klen would have ventured to save Neruru, but that doesn't seem to be the case. I am just wondering at this point if turning Neruru into an undead would even make herself useful. Alicia is a walking corpse, but her combat abilities & knowledge are still intact. I get the feeling Neruru would lose the abiltiy to breast feed if she died.
Alicia dropping all the bandits in the water is smart & I love the bandits getting karma back to them. Also, on another note, the mention of magic advancing to control dark beasts sounds terrifying. Although I can just assume that is not a realistic expectation of the evolution of magic.